Erica Swallow has worked for a year at Mashable, (a tech and digital news site) and in that time has come across several pitch phrases that she despises. They are listed here.
- 1.Circle Back
- 2.Follow Up
Both of these phrases are used when the email sent by the reporter does not get a timely response. They assume that the email “may not be working or was caught by spam.” In most cases, this is not the reason. Most likely the pitch was dry, confusing or lengthy and the writer didn’t have time to figure out what the message was really about.
3. “Put Out Some Feelers” This brings a picture of insects to mind, and Swallow says to get back to her when you become a human again.
4. “Gauge/Re-Gauge Your Interest” Swallow says that if she wasn’t interested the first time, she probably isn’t in need to have her interest “regauged.”
5. “IndustryLeading” 6.”Revolutionary” 7.”Groundbreaking”
All three of these phrases will get reporters to promptly delete your email or respond with a short “not interested.”
8. “Did you get my email?”/ “I noticed you didn’t respond.”
The message is: email works. To speak plainly: Not interested!
If you work in public relations, Swallow suggests that you try to avoid completely annoying the reporters you work with. And: “Limit the PR jargon and just be a human.”




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